This reads a bit awkwardly and could be tightened for clarity. A smoother version would be:

The Be Bold video was shown at the Mamaroneck event, and I’ve included the link again for your review.

Slightly more polished options

  • The Be Bold video was shown at the Mamaroneck event, and I’ve included the link again for your review.
  • The Be Bold video was featured at the Mamaroneck event, and I’ve shared the link again for your convenience.
  • The Be Bold video was shown at the Mamaroneck event; I’ve included the link again for you to review.

Best choice

If you want it to sound professional and natural, the first version is the strongest. It fixes the repetition of “again” and replaces “how does this read” with a clean statement.

TL;DR

Your sentence is understandable, but it should be rephrased for flow and grammar. The clearest version is: “The Be Bold video was shown at the Mamaroneck event, and I’ve included the link again for your review.”